Concept a Week 01-Lumbricina

Vision: I am just not sure where this would be set at or what it has going for it. Is it a desert-dweller sand worm? A forest ground hog? A space worm even? A better description would be nice. For now, all I see is a naked worm-groundhog. 1.5/5

Originality: The jaw seems as though it was taken right off of an Arbiter from Halo and then formed around the Jaw, but the way the mouth is set up saves it from being a complete copy-paste. I like that. As for the rest of the body, a nice mix between skin transitioning into claws while being all balloon-y and vein-y along with the ribbed design is something new I have never seen on a creature. Only thing I can think of that comes close is a worm, and even that is a large gap. 4.5/5

Technique: The whole thing feels very smooth on the eyes while being ribbed for whatever purpose it may be. The way it was drawn gives it that smoothness from just the flat shaded colors to the dips and folds in the skin. 3.5/5

Impact: I'm not to sure about how to feel about this creature, whether to be fearful of it or befriend it. If it is livestock or a wild animal, but to be safe, those teeth and the full-body skin and vein appearance will surely keep me away from it if I find it in nature. Again, I could use a description of what it is. 2.5/5

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Reflection: Overall, it is an OK concept. The mix between veins, ribs and claws along with the flat heat make it an interesting, calm type of creature, a thinker, a hard worker, but that is my guess on what it is. The only thing that bothers me is a lack of a description of what it is.

-Tekky