EDIT: You can adopt it here~! >w< [link]
Decription:This deer spends its time lighting the skies by jumping high into the sky with its thin, needle-like legs, and then setting off tiny explosions in the air with it's magical antlers. It's vibrant colors only show up and glow at night; during the day, it looks like a plain, dark colored deer. Which each and every new night, the colors on it shift with no exception for its eyes.
--Spoilers for a deer i'm about to release made specially for the New Year~ ewe
Well . . . you can't get it right now because Squiby is throwing a hissy fit. e3e
I'll update this description when I have it up. >w>
Anyways, there are three other deers i'm almost done with. The only thing that is taking time is that each adult stage is separately drawn, so yes; the other 3rd stages for the others will not look like this one. >w<
I'll be working on either the Steampunk Gilffrin or the snakey thing next . . . oh, and sorry for all this adoptable stuff you guys. It was really out of the blue. ;w;
-Peyton
The only negative things that I have to say:
Anything other than those two things is perfect, and I especially like the way that you drew the hooves on the adult deer. This is a perfect adoptable, and if I had a Squiby, I would totally adopt it!
For vision I gave a five, because the vision of the lights is so pwetty! The sparkles coming from the deer's antlers are so cute, and I think this is a great visual drawing.
For originality, I gave a four-and-a-half, simply because plenty of people did New Years creatures, however this is very different from a lot of them!
For technique, I gave a five, because the lines are smooth, there aren't any out-of-the-line places except for the lights glowing, and the eyes are well done, and simply because you are amazing when it comes to spiffiness.
For impact I gave a five, because the lights contrasting on the dark colors really does make an impact, and the sparkles everywhere help add to that impact.
All in all it is a very good piece, and could only use a bit of minor adjusting. It is a wonderful little adoptable, and it is so cute and I want it so much now! lD Great work!
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