When I saw this piece I almost screamed. I love the picture a lot, it looks like you actually did this traditionally, not digitally. I would love to see it a version a lot more realistic, like whiskers and such. I love this piece very much! You did such a fantastic job on it, just like you do on all your other pieces of art! I love your technique! Its so original and beautiful! I'm sure a lot of other followers would love to see more fanart of Firepaw/heart/star.
I hope this critique helps and is fair enough for you!
I'm absolutely stunned at how much this drawing stood out to me among the other Firepaw/heart/star drawings I've ever seen. You've managed to make it look realistic, but complimenting it with color blends and paint strokes. It's truly unique how you've made it look like he has fur, and not going over the top. I can only say that I wish he could have had whiskers, to fully complete the drawing. It's great, got style, and is very much how I imagined him in the books. I especially love the eyes and the tuft of fur falling over the right one. You've got the hues and tones right - it's truly an amazing work of art.